Thursday, April 15, 2010

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My name is jimbob and I like to play hockey and I also like to eat nachos and I also have cool friends. I think that hockey fun fun and I also like to play soccer and I also like to play xbox sometimes I play call of duty. I love school and math is my favourite subject because it is fun and cool to do math and science is cool to and so is english. Alot of the time I work on my farm I have a alpaca named Dante and he is fluffy and cool just like me im cool. Sometimes dante eats these wierd plants gets sick and throw up everywhere and Dante has a wife named Donatella.

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  1. My name is Jim Bob, I like to play Hockey. I love to eat nachos and i have many cool friends. In my oponion hockey is fun, but i also like soccer. One other activity that I enjoy would be xbox. My favorite game is Call of Duty. I love school, my favorite subject is math. I also enjoy science and english. On the farm that I own, there is an Alpaka named Dante. Dante is fluffy and cool just like me. Donatella is Dante's wife, whenever he eats the weird plants Donatella gets mad cause she has to clean it up.
    I liked your Dante part haha

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  2. 1. My name is jimbob and I like to play hockey. I also like nachos and have cool friends.
    2. Hockey is really fun and I also like soccer. Sometimes I play call of duty on xbox.
    3.I love school my favourite subjects are math, science and english.
    4.Alot of the time I work on my farm, I have a alpaca named Dante. He is fluffy and cool just like me .
    5.sometime dante eats weird plants and gets sick, he throws up everywhere. Dante wife is named Donatella.

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