Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Run on sentence
There are many of varieties of video games, which are all based on different things. They also can come from sports and shooting etc.If you wanted to you could be playing at five in the morning, when your parents are asleep. However, you might have to put the volume really quiet or muted so you won't wake them up.
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The first sentence was great, but the second and third sentence didn't feel right.
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