Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Life being invisible sure would be exciting. I could do anything I wanted, I would start by raiding mcdonalds and taking everything I could eat. Then I would go find somebody that I really dont like at all (Justin Beiber) and either punch him or pant's him in a public facility. Another thing I would do is I would fly on a private jet to Hollywood and go to some really rich celebrity's house and use all there really expensive thing's like there cars, theatre room and pool etc. I would probably live there for quite a long time. Being invisible would be hard though, because if you needed to get someones attention they won't know your there but it would get so brutal being invisible like not being able to play hockey or any of the sport's/activities/hobbies you love to play and watch. It would be so much easier not having to pay for any of your entries or flights anywhere or if you wanted to go to an NHL hockey game you could get in free and go to as many as you wanted or to disneyland/disneyworld you could go anytime without having to ever pay. Whatever I felt like eating or doing I could just go get it.I would also go around the school pranking everyone I could find and scaring them with floating books and chairs and them not ever knowing that it was me the entire time, or I would put on a white sheet and jump out and scare teachers and students which would be very exciting. My next thing to do would be to go to England and play around with the queens crown and hide it and see if there would be alot of chaos, that would be fun. But personally I would love to try being invisible for atleast a few days but I love my life and I wouldnt ever want to be invisible for the rest of my life, it would just be to irritating.
Amazing job. In all I would say the layout was good and your ideas were fairly organized, maybe you could try using paragraphs to make your work look neater, but that's just a nice to have thing and your work is good without it.
ReplyDeleteI would give a 3 or 4 for ideas
ReplyDeleteI liked your idea that if you were invisble you couldn't play your favorite sports and you couldn't have anyone to talk to because you can't be seen. I thought you were pretty focused with your ideas. I would give you a 3.5
ReplyDeletei found this quite funny and that you were very focoused with great grammar with a few ideas so i am going to give you a 4
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